Comments : Haze

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Terribly sad but beautifully written and very accomplished throughout. Your descriptions here are first rate.

    Your bloom
    disintegrates
    into my veins
    into my tongue and
    across my vision -

    ^^

    Excellent stuff.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Lost star

    This is a wonderfully written poem, it has a certain rhythm to it that I love, a sad poem but beautifully presented. Loved it!