WOW URE SUCH AN AWESOME POET LOL

Wow! Great poem.. Hope you keep up the great work... =]

that was awesome, keep it up

That was really good, you have a typo in the end there I think. I really liked the first two lines, but the whole thing was really awesome. Keep writing.
Love,

-Blew ^_~.

can't believe you praised yourself *shakes head*. oh well, it was true! another short poem- yay for me! off to the second part... take care:)