Comments : Sinking

  • 1 month ago

    by Walter

    A very visual write which makes me feel this pain as I read and does give you that sinking feeling. Nicely written!

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A dark and deliciously written piece in terms of the visuals you create -

    I
    am half-built
    with metal staples
    falling from my
    tongue
    and steel spines
    twisting through
    my flesh

    ^^

    I particularly liked this part.

    All the best