Comments : One in a million suns (syntuit)

  • 2 months ago

    by Star

    I really like how this started with whoosh, it immediately drew the picture for me.

    It's good to get to read your syntuits again here!

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Whoosh! Another shooting star poet returns with a nice little piece.
    Hope you are well fella. M :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Violet Raven

    It is an honor to be someone's inspiration. :)

    I always enjoy and rarely see onomatopoeic words in poetry itself and in such a short poem it is unheard of really. So, whoosh to me is almost a cartoony word that fits well within the poem because i imagine two kids or even two teenagers sitting next to each other forming these feelings and perhaps one person "accidentally" holds hands and it just falls into place.

    Everything happens for a reason and we can wish upon each star but once we find that one person forever it really is a dream come true.