Comments : Dad

  • 5 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A lovely, heartfelt tribute to your dad. There's a small typo on line 10, with the word, still.
    I liked how you expressed sadness by suggesting the sun seems to shine less now. A loss like this certainly does tarnish everything. All I know is in time when you look up, you may feel the warmth on your face and feel good, just like when your dad used to smile at you.

    Take care