I know this is sad there are some dark emotions in it, but there is something I’m noticing and it’s making me happy. I’m not sure how people my age were like , but wasn’t like still I’m not so I’m talking about myself, I’m feeling old though I’m in my mid twenties lol. Anyways, I’m noticing that the younger generation are expressing their feelings more. You’re more aware that there is nothing wrong with that, I see it in my younger sister as well. I truly hope you do express your feelings not only in poetry, but to the people close to you as well.
Sorry if this is a lot of rambling. I really like this, it’s very powerful :)

A lot of strength in this. The Ying and yang of the choices and the results of those choices.