Comments : Obtundation

  • 11 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    superb imagery here in a nice visual form. This will speaks to many a budding mind, trying to emulate their idols/peers. I particularly like the end image/metaphor of an unheard, uncertain voice. Glad it's nominated.

    Take care

    • 11 months ago

      by Daniel

      Thank you, both. :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Cool write Daniel! Glad to see it nominated!