Comments : Far and Away

  • 2 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    In these uncertain times, it's writes like this that bring home the calamity of our situation. The metaphor of white water rafting is a good one. None of us wants to drown and we certainly didn't volunteer for certain death, but that's what many of us ultimately fear. I like your format too, it enables certain words to be highlighted, like: 'tomorrows dreams'. Nicely done. I do like a clever poet who likes to display their message uniquely.

    Take care.

    • 2 years ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Thank you Mr Darcy for reading and for your comments.
      Also many thanks for the nomination.