Comments : Scripted

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    You've painted a wonderful vignete. This piece of observational writing has made me smile.

    It dances across her beauty so sublime,
    yet her pretty nose says otherwise
    as her hands shoo it away like they would a needy pet.
    ^
    I could see this scene so clearly. Well done. *Hands you a Cuban*

    • 5 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, good Sir. Glad you enjoyed it and that it made you smile.

      *Takes Cuban* won't catch me saying no to one of these! :)

  • 4 years ago

    by silver cloud

    i guess its not funny just because where are not fish