Comments : Faded Spirit

  • 2 months ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very powerful and the layout works well here too, matches the fast pace of the poem.

    In the end I could picture someone holding a heart within their hands, literally taking control and power of whether that heart keeps beating or not. I think it reflects a lot of being captured within a pain someone has caused us and even though we may feel free, the hold someone or something can have on us can still linger strongly

    Great read

    • 2 months ago

      by Star

      I like what you pictured, thank you ^_^