Comments : 2020! What a year!

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I love the lines

    Death was no longer a news but the number of deaths

    Alluding to Covid-19's death toll.
    I like the positivity in this. It's an optimistic view and ,sometimes, a different angle to look at things always brings hope for the year ahead.
    I think that the question mark after ' what a year' should be changed to an exclamation, as it's more of a statement than a question, although I might be wrong. But apart from that, I love the grammar and hope in this, as it brings an exciting perspective to look forward to the year ahead.

    • Thanks for reading, and yes you're right, "What a year" was supposed to be an exclamation, it was mistake.. thanks for the review