Comments : I was never a poet

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    ahhh but you are- A true poet releases pain and seals it in ink.. And this poem is a powerful one.

    • 3 years ago

      by Shah

      Love makes poets I must say
      Appreciate your comment

  • 3 years ago

    by M.Useless

    The Odes have been recording and releasing pain for hundreds of years and this is a classic example. Thank you for sharing.

    • 3 years ago

      by Shah

      As they say: perfection of love comes with pain.
      Thanks for reading

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    although you say 'words can never picture the unseen' you mange to describe with finesse, i might add, the sad hollowness of loss.

    I was confused by your phrasing 'What is it worth of?' - to me, if this was tweaked to read "of what is it worth? this would scan. You may have a deeper meaning for this and so the question is more cerebral than me.

    Take care.