Comments : I felt the current

  • 1 month ago

    by M.Useless

    Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This really is a lovely write. 'Soothing' is the perfect adjective here, I think!

    Take care.

  • 1 month ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    "...your voice
    rocks over me,
    and light."
    the juxtaposition of rocks and smooth (typo) is effective as it shows how powerfully this person 'rocks' your emotional state.

    Nice work.

    • 1 month ago

      by Skyfire

      Aha, thank you for the catch.