Comments : I felt the current

  • 1 month ago

    by M.Useless

    Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This really is a lovely write. 'Soothing' is the perfect adjective here, I think!

    Take care.

  • 1 month ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    "...your voice
    rocks over me,
    smoothe
    and light."
    ^
    the juxtaposition of rocks and smooth (typo) is effective as it shows how powerfully this person 'rocks' your emotional state.

    Nice work.

    • 1 month ago

      by Skyfire

      Aha, thank you for the catch.