Comments : What am I?

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Interesting and heartfelt to read. I liked the rhymes and metaphors throughout, and the questions you asked. Nicely done :)
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  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this! A question, self-reflection/ analysis. Seldom do we make the correct turns in order to reach our desired destination. If we did, we would only wonder if there were a better route. I think your journey is much like another. We stumble through like, making mistakes, ignoring advice and, hopefully, finding our way to happiness. Some do, some don't, but the true lesson to learn, is the way to be happy with yourself. Once that lesson is learnt, then everything else is a bonus!

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