Comments : Warming Signs

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Nearly missed this! Sorry:)
    ' warming signs '.
    ^ if I'm correct, that is an excellent pun on global warming- or you've mistyped ' warning ', lol
    Even if you have, I think ' warming signs' is just such an amazing title!
    The content of the poem was interesting and I love how you've weeved facts into story.
    The ryhming and wording I found was really smoothly executed. I especially enjoyed the second stanza. I love the word ' cherished' ,as it just seems to say everything, and in poems it sounds so soothing!
    I loved this one and it has another great message :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Keira and's not a typo, lol and I am really glad you picked the way I was hoping it to be read. (Although it did cross my mind when I wrote it down that everyone would probably assume I misspelt warning!) Thanks so much for your comment which was a pleasure to read :)