Comments : Love Is A Smile Poem (Tricube)

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    This is a simple piece but seems as though it may be a difficult one to produce well, I think you did it well.
    Though a head's up, I could be wrong so please forgive me, but I think 'hand' in the second stanze should be 'and' though as I say, I could be wrong.
    Take care, Em x

    • 2 months ago

      by Abstract Poet

      Thank you, Em! I am not sure to change that one line it was my first attempt at it.

  • 1 month ago

    by Jack

    Great Poem!