Beautiful! I love the comparisons, similies and metaphors you make throughout the poem. My favourite lines were
There's something reminding me
Of the fluffy pillow that my sister stole
Every time.
For me, that just says it all! First of all, because it's a very . . . Sibling like thing to do. Secondly, because I live for fluffy pillows and comparing someone you love or admire to it fits perfectly, lol
Is the title meant to be ' Ghost OF her ' or 'ghost or her'? Either way, it still works :)
I love a good free verse and this is precisely what this is! the poem is stunningly written and I really enjoyed it.