Comments : Ghost of Her

  • 2 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Beautiful! I love the comparisons, similies and metaphors you make throughout the poem. My favourite lines were
    There's something reminding me
    Of the fluffy pillow that my sister stole
    Every time.
    For me, that just says it all! First of all, because it's a very . . . Sibling like thing to do. Secondly, because I live for fluffy pillows and comparing someone you love or admire to it fits perfectly, lol
    Is the title meant to be ' Ghost OF her ' or 'ghost or her'? Either way, it still works :)
    I love a good free verse and this is precisely what this is! the poem is stunningly written and I really enjoyed it.

    • 2 years ago

      by Maud

      Thank you so much! This really means a lot to me and I’m so glad you enjoyed it. My grandmother was everything to me and her memory is strong in me.