Comments : Winter (Double Haiku)

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Perfect syllable count. I've always liked chain haikus, so I enjoyed this one. I got to the last line of the first haiku and became ridiculously confused - much to my embarrassment - then laughed at myself as I read the last haiku.
    Would you call it a haiku though? Haikus tend to be entirely nature based, senryus are more . . . Human based.
    Either way, I liked it :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Jack

      Thanks you!