Comments : Retrospect

  • 1 week ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I enjoyed the poem anyway! Lol
    Very powerful. Personally, I think the shift in the rhyme scheme actually works quite well - almost like another angle. Anyway, the final stanza was absolutely amazing to read; it was so moving, as was the whole poem.

    • 1 week ago

      by Obscure

      Thank you so much Kiera! I really appreciate your comment.