Comments : Yesterday (NaPoWriMo 2021 Day 11)

  • 1 month ago

    by Maher

    Interesting write. I don't see anything triggery in it, but there are some good messages in there. I think this one hits home for many and it's something that we really do need to understand:

    "Time will pass and so will friends
    But some relationships must end
    And may halt on a sour note
    that stings your eyes and fills your throat"

    Thanks for sharing :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    I truly have no words for this.. It's similar to what I'd write I guess.
    This flowed extremely well and there were no gaps as in there was nothing that seemed to break up the flow so nothing that I'd changed, it made me gasp for breathe more than once because I could relate to quite a few things within this that have happened to me over time, as I've grown up but these things help mould our lives into what they are meant to be, I think.
    "Hug your friends: One day you'll be
    Separated by a screen
    A plague is coming and will leave
    Suffering you won't believe"
    ^
    This is my favourite part.
    Take care

  • 1 month ago

    by Rog

    Addictions that you thought were beat
    Now see you as a tasty treat

    It's beautifully expressed but that's a dangerous thinking habit. Like no responsibility
    Anyway, I recognize the feelings, the perks of being an outcast
    Another idea, if your former self writes a letter to help your present self

  • 1 month ago

    by Star

    I have to say, you’re amazing!!!!
    You’re so aware of everything, I only know you through your poetry but still I can say you’re really maturing.
    I still didnt write my day 11 poem, and tbh this intimidates me!!!
    I’ll be nominating this on Monday for sure :)