Comments : Expression

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    This is absolutely beautiful but it is tinged with sadness too especially as the first line says "I remember.." so it's like this is a lost love and it makes me wonder how this love has been lost especially as the love you convey is picture perfect.
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  • 1 month ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A lovely tribute. There's something bittersweet about remembered love. Nice work!

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mr. D and there certainly is..

  • 1 month ago

    by Star

    Im glad this is nominated!! The format compliments your words beautifully.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Star:)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely writing, Michael. Well done.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Congratulations!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Subha Gain

    It's been good!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Thank you for your comments :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Jack

    I am so glad this won! I wanted this poem to win from the day it was posted! Congrats!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Lexie Lou

    I absolutely loved that Michael :D

  • 5 days ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Lexie and Jack for your lovely comments :)