Comments : Park keeper at large (syntuit)

  • 3 months ago

    by Keira Pickard

    'Good God' I think is the best term here!!

    Was there a particular inspiration for this or was it an idea that just wondered into your head?
    Aside from my questions, this was wonderfully written . very clever - despite the context and scarily good title lining up to star in my nightmares tonight! It can be seen as a clever twist on flowers, but the idea can easily be interpreted darkly. I fear for the flowers' sake

    • 3 months ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Hello, i was inspired by a recent poem on here called 'death'. I started to write a comment and this sprung into my head. As your dad alluded to, the heads are daisies/ wild flowers in a meadow. As for the park keeper part, this was a snipe at our local council workers who pay no attention to wild flowers - sometimes grass/meadows are best left alive!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Daisies do suffer so at this murderous time of year. Very good, Michael.

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    This is a fantastic piece Mr, murder at best but I like it just for the imagery.
    Take care,
    Em. X

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, such a dark clever write...loved it!