Comments : Perspective - Senryu

  • 4 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Very clever. I like the contrast of the way you've used 'curve' and 'straight'. I enjoy his you've centered it, and the title is excellent! I love it:)

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Kiera for all your thoughts and wonderful comment :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Damn those curve balls and the resultant wonky thoughts! Imaginative writing, Walter.

    All the best as ever

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Got to blame them on something! All the best for you too and thanks for your comment Ben.