"...let your lungs remember there is oxygen" Sometimes we get so bound up with life that we forget to breathe. I like this poem, especially, the tree shape - i am not sure if this is deliberate, but it does lend itself to the theme of oxygen and time/life.

Nice work.

Let your lungs remember there is oxygen

^^

Now that's poetry, and so very true, We could all do with reminding our lungs that.

Take care and all the very best,
Ben