I love the way you have penned this piece.
You have shown a deep sense of strength in the battle between mind, heart, and body.
I enjoyed the story of this poem, the way you took the reader on a journey within your mind where a war rages inside.
The hope for a better life, a better society, and a place of acceptance is well penned also.
You show many different sides of the coin in regards to life within this piece.
Each stanza helps tell a story of different emotions, good, bad, and middle of the road.
Compelling poem.
Keep it up.