Comments : Stockholm

  • 1 year ago

    by Star

    The end.
    thank you for writing it ^^

  • 1 year ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    First, the obvious: the title gives rise to a theme of the victim embracing the captor as in the Stockholm syndrom. You carry this theme through beautifully as you merge with the darkness and fall in love with agony. The cost is paid by swallowing your emotions, denying the honest expression of your innermost feelings. Inevitably the process consumes you, it wreaks vengeance on your peace sinking you down. In the end there is nothing of you left.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ink

    Hi Rania, this is exceptionally well written. I loved it in its entirety but

    "As black gradually overhauls the sky
    at the peak of sunset,
    all the rage I tame
    implicitly pulls me into silence."

    Particularly grabbed me. Amazing. Regards Ink.

  • 1 year ago

    by Skyfire

    Very evocative. Loved reading this.