Cheers

Please finish the diary passage! Quite unique way of writing.

//May our tears be a blessing and our scars be proof.
And always in that order.//

^^^I read the file line again when I got to the second line. Quite interesting. Keep writing.

Short, simple and well written. Your perspective read like a diary entry and that I think that is what you were going for. I like the hopeful message throughout the poem and you never strayed from that message, which makes it a quick read.