Comments : Cheers

  • 1 year ago

    by Rayven

    Short, simple and well written. Your perspective read like a diary entry and that I think that is what you were going for. I like the hopeful message throughout the poem and you never strayed from that message, which makes it a quick read.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kips2.0

    Please finish the diary passage! Quite unique way of writing.

    //May our tears be a blessing and our scars be proof.
    And always in that order.//

    ^^^I read the file line again when I got to the second line. Quite interesting. Keep writing.