Hey Trincy. That was an emotional piece. Very well done. You write with such feeling which is evident through the words you have used. Keep up the wonderful work and take care! I hope to read more of your work soon!
Kind regards, Kristina

i really didn't write this in a poetic perspective.. It is just a few words i uttered in depression.. and i just wrote it down. Surely it took off half of the depression.

i can realte...u write really well

A nother great one from you Trincy, I am becoming a big fan. Thanx, Timothy r

Great poem, Trincy! I loved it all...but especially the turn you took in the next to last stanza... where you go from crying to forgetting how to cry. That happens so often!

this is really good, i liked it alot, i get the point to it, and i like it. :) awesome work :)
-Mortalidaga

This poem is very good, and so what if it doesn't rhyme? It's still beautiful, and I loved every line. Keep up the good work.

A great be of free verse - Like it!!!