Thank you to everyone who has commented and voted on this poem so far. And thank you in advance to the ones who will.

Excellent piece of poetry, David. This poem was truly heartfelt, and of course, extremely meaningful. You did such a brilliant job in writing this wonderful piece. Very nice flow of words and simply terrific. Thank you for taking the time to share your magnificent work. Take care always!
Kind regards, Kristina

Great poem, David. Its sweet. Keep up the great work. Hope to read more of your poems soon.

Love Always,
Ashley

Great poem, David. That was sweet. Keep up the good work. I hope to read more of your poems soon.

Love Always,
Ashley

Great poem dude....i actually have one that's kinda like it but i think urs is way better...i loved the ending!

that was a sweet poem i gave you a 5 check out mine later if you get the chance .. again good job

"fibre of your bones "is a great line . nice job . can i send it to my girlfriend ?

Anyone can use anyone of my poems for their own personal use. Just dont sell them or something like that. And thank you to everyone who commented.

Awesome job! keep writing!

~Grace

wow u have such wonderful talent i hope you dont waste it.......thanks for sharing your world with us