How clever. Writing from the perspectiveof Hades about a story of Greek Mythology. The repitition was nice also.
Aken Sol

that poem really caught my eye! great job! i'm going to cali in... *stops and counts* ... five months? i dunno where you are, really, but i bet it's pretty there. take care:)

Very well written, I enjoyed it.

--Sher

Wow.. I like the whole king thing. hehe
I love the rhyming scheme here.
excellent as ever.

this one really blew me away! U HAVE TALENT! i love it! sooo original! great work!

Hmmm.....this is a different poem...i like it a lot...i don't have anything like this one...cool man

Mythology is one of my favorite things to read. so interesting, it just really captures you in their fantasy worlds. Amazing work once again. I loved how it was written.

I loved the story of Persephone. How creative. Again great rhyme scheme, and i liked the repitition of "the river bed." You asked me to be honest and well, you're a very talented poet. I can't find one fault. Well done.

weaird but historical lol it was good
twisted=kendra

I enjoyed Orpheus, but this had a great feel, like a lover's ballad from the Renaissance. The refrain was perfectly matched and used in each stanza. Great poem!

You have an amazing talent for writing! This is a very original poem, I love Greek mythology. This is one of the first poems that I have seen that is related to the subject outside of my English book. Very original!

I love mythology and you have told the story of Persephone(i love that name don't you!) so well