Comments : I Stare at You

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    wow... this is excellent.. it's like you peeked inside my heart... and found something I had forgotten was there...

    I think the line that hit me the hardest was:
    I wish you would see me
    Just acknowledge that I'm here
    But you can't see past the wall
    Even though it's clear

    I have felt that so many times!

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    great poem..:-)