This is about how lost I've been for the past few weeks and me wishing that my friend is still there and still does want me as now I know how horible I was to him

Good poem, keep up the good work! :) Love to hear from you again

This is a really nice poem... good concept and message...
just a couple things you need to edit...

Vail-should be veil

except-should be accept
your-should be you're (or you are)

Another pleasure to read - looking forward to seeing more posts from you!