Ha I think everyone knows someone like this.

Hye thnaks for the comment...and ummm...i read most of your poems as well and you are evry good. I think this oen hits me most...i really like it. Keep writing.

the first lines are the ones that are important to capyure the reader .. this has a superb introduction and doesnt fade away either .. its story is as the comment above , but the way you put across how it makes u feel is v v good