Another great one with a really nice rhythm... it was kind os sing-songy! :o) I really enjoyed reading it.

I think I would cut each line in half, though...so each stanza is four lines rather than two... that will avoid the spill over on some of the lines.

Can't wait to see more from you!

Sweet poem... I too dream a lot like that.. The rhymes were nice... The flow was good. Yeah as Ann said..it is a bit clumsy... It will be more pleasing to read if you make it four lined.