good poem!

liked this poem! short, powerful and intriguing.

This poem left me with something to think about, you've said so much in so few words.

Hoorah, Cheers, and Well Done:

-paperdoll

Borrow my profanity
to steal your innocence.

I loved those lines a lot. You could write a book just on those lines!

Good Writing,

//T.L.//

Is it just me, or do you agree with me that society is the worst thing that could've ever been created on this planet?

I am very glad that someone else writes about things like this.

It also brings great joy to me to know that someone else can see through humanity.

I like the poem, I like how blunt the message is, even though it is not directly stated.

Excellent work.

Whoops, I forgot to add something to my last comment.

Change "society" to "society/religion."