that was realli good ur very much so talented n i read a few more of ur poems i just want 2 say congrats on ur writing style very nice

Hey
That was pretty good. It sounded like it could mean a bunch of different things, which makes it easier to relate to. Overall it was well written and flowed. A little repetitive, but I liked it.
Keep writing,
Love,

Blue ^_~.

Nice poem. Keep it up

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good job i like this one, i have one similiar to this called "why did you lead me on" thanks for the comments on my poem. keep it up