Hey
That was a pretty good poem, the flow was a little shakey, but it was still well written. The message is a little unclear but that isn't nessesarily a bad thing. Keep writing.
Love,

-Blue ^_~.

Why do you swing between extremes? The last poem was ssoooo emotional and happy. This poem is that much depressing. The poem should be written very well beacuse i am going to depression........................shhhuuummmmmmm(that was the background music for me going to depression..lol!) Cheer up!
Love, Trincy.