Comments : Betrayal

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I left some titles for you on the discussion board...

    I do like Tiffany's suggestion as well.... but it's kind of redundant... maybe "The Last Night" or "The Final Night"

    btw, this is an awesome poem... going to read your others now...

  • 19 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    thanks for the suggestions guys. i do like them all...but im still thinking about which one to choose or not choose. again thanks for taking the time to read this and think for me! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Million Tears

    you can call it"regret"

  • 19 years ago

    by Million Tears

    just a sugestion though and very nice poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    thanks everyone for giving me ideas. all of them were very good ideas, but i think i finally came to a decision. but thanks again! :)

    Ten Feet Tall

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Val

    Oh wow loved this poem. I think all I can think is WOW. LOL, I'm gonna check more of your stuff out.
    I definately give you a 5 on this one.

  • 19 years ago

    by Joe Moore

    I really liked your poem
    thanks for reading mine
    i'll read more of yours
    good love to you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Silva

    another great poem! your poems bring out powerfull emotion! i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    great poem, have to go read the extended version now..definetly deserving of its 5 rating