i cried for ages after i read this poem it is so good u have a great talent keep it up

This was heart-wrenching! Such great sadness!! Very well written with such emotion!

Wow Hayley! So sad.....but so wonderfully written

this is really well written. it was really sad. keep writing

This is the Hayley I know..greta poem but sadness abundant....Love ya girl, Tim

Another amazing poem. So sad and full of emotion. great work

very well written poem, very sad. You really have a good way with words. Keep on writing. So sorry you feel this way

This poem is very well written and conveys the true feelings of deep depression and pain that does not go away. My poem "Scary" also talks about suicide and although it does not talk about the people in which i almost left as yours does it does tell the emotions of suicide. Very good job and i hope that your talent with words gets you far in life and makes you happy. ~Justin

I liked your poem, it was different then most I've read. It reminded me of a suicide note which is scary but that is exactly what i would want to mention in my note if i had ever commited such an act.
Keep up the good work!! I hope you don't really feel this way

Hey. its not bad. No meter to it and it doesnt flow very well but its a subject that hits home. not bad.

Hayley, that was sooo good, your so talented and your such a wonderful writer, keep up the awesome work :)
-Mortalidaga

hi my name is jess and that was a good poem plz write back

sometimes i fill the same i know how you fill. if you want to read my poems just click on search and look for "The Love of My Life" and "to Jessica A." and te me what you think.

WOW..I LOVE reading your poems!!! your such a great writer!!!
I could read your poems over and over!! GREAT JOB!!

does this mean you're dead...plz if you're there dont do it. so many ppl care, and you can get thru this plz just see somone. i'm scared for you, and those who loved you. plz dont leave, they need you here

This is an ace poem keep up the good work