Comments : Heaven's Guardian

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    This is my first love poem. I had a hard time coming up with the lines. Please comment and vote.

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Thank you for your comment. It's hard for me to write a love poem. It doesn't come naturally to me. I'm going to keep trying though.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Awesome!! I loved this! I can't believe that was your first poem!! Good job!! I can't wait to hear more from you!! You are very talented!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Temptation

    Hiya
    I think this is a really cute and very touching!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Awesome! I really like it.
    --Sherry

  • 19 years ago

    by TattooedPierced

    Loved it. I feel that way about the guy I'm in love with. Hopefully you willread some of my older poems that were dedicated to him....Much Love

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    I've only been writing for 2 weeks now.

  • 19 years ago

    by Stacey de Luna

    That was an awesome poem. Very deep. It was really good.

    Stacey de Luna^-^

  • 19 years ago

    by Lydia O

    This was just so wholesome and refreshing. Good work. Loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    You are an inspiration to all of us who can only dream of being as good as you :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Aww...c'mon guys you're making me blush hehe. Am I really that much of an inspiration? Wow...I'm honored. But my writings mostly come from the heart. Thank you all for your comments.