This is one of my favourite of yours. IT was so....(what to say.....) different! The way you related things.. the metaphores you used...Ahh! what a poem! So well written!

On the other half.....Errrrr i am getting angry! Stop being depressed.......please....be happy... I don't want you to be upset like this... Won't you smile for us????

Love, Trincy.

hehe, like you said, I didn't get the meaning of this poem until I read "pre"... great use of metaphore, such a unique poem, I love it now I finally understand it.... there are hints of sadness in this poem... *sigh*... try and be happy... lol, another thing in life that's easier to say then done :P

This may be one of the best peoms I've ever read here. I understood exactly what you were saying. (Though I did read Pre first)

No matter how many times you fall, someone will always be there to catch you. Wither it be friends, family or even yourself.

Hey!! I had a girl do this to me before:
" First it started off smooth
The gentle wind lulling and calming me
Then it got a little more rough
The wind a blur, now I can't see

Having the time of my life
And then comes the unexpected turn
Being thrown through loops and twists
I felt I was becoming sick"

Very interesting poem.