aww i love it. I can almost feel fall. Great job.

Nicely done! I agree with Barb. It did paint a piture of Fall in my mind. Great!

aw this poems so cute you can almost feel the fall coming!!! its great! keep writing x

I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite. Most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them.