Aaahh very nice. Someday if you keep writing and the more you work on the small touches you will be make it big.

beautiful! so beautiful. ive read other poems of yours too. you are an awesome writter...keep it up! :)

I love how this poem was wrote..it was really writing in godd from..if i do say so myself..i would llike to tank you 4 commenting one my poem...so this is ur return.....-----ty----Meagan