wow, great job, Hayley... I especially like the last stanza...and can really relate to it

Wow, another masterpiece as usual girl! You just never cease to amaze me with your talent. great job!

--Sher

HEY BABE,
I CAN RELATE TO THAT, ITS SO WIERD BECAUSE I STARTED TO THINK THAT WAY ABOUT SOMEONE JUST RECENTLY AND WHEN I READ YOUR POEM, IT WENT RIGHT TO HOW I FELT..

GREAT JOB HONEY..
LUV JULES

Wow.......the poems damn kool excellent!

WOW!! I love reading your poems!! this one is SOO great!!! your an amazng writer!!!

absolutely super......deep poem but really great Hayley. kepp writing girl. your a master.

GREAT POEM

omg..hayley, that is truley amazing, you are an inspiration to me, one of many, you are outstanding and amazing, i love your work, awesome i swear, your poem has such meaning and depth and your rhymes are incredible, i am not smart enough to know proper words for this..i dont know fancy words to describe things but your work is beautiful and enchanting. amazing.
-Mortalidaga

excellent poem! the rhyming is perfect. keep on writing and take care:)

Hey babe,
How are u doing, i haven't been on latley! Thanks for commenting on mine awhile ago! I love this poem it is so emotional but amzing to read! Anyways comment on my new three poems! Tell me what ya think~ Hope all is good>
Lyssa

you know whats comming lol good job always i love your poems! i look foward to reading more so you know what to do now POP DA COLLA lol wonderful job is all i can say.

you know whats comming lol good job always i love your poems! i look foward to reading more so you know what to do now POP DA COLLA lol wonderful job is all i can say.