Hey i like what that david kid said..I dont know of any suggestions i just absolutley loved this poem....But you got a son?? thats so cute!! I bet that little boy is gonna grow up just like his mom..sweet and funny and I'm sure he'll make a difference in the world and touch peoples heart like you have mine! I loved this poem girl!!! i have to go read it again lol....but great job...i couldnt ask for better!!

loved the poem, can't wait to keep reading more works from you, you are def added to my favorites :)

wow loved the poem i am speechless so much emotion in that poem it was very good keep up the work

Emma

Your feelings were very impacting this is one of your poems that is not directly effecting on me but from your words i feel like i share some of you emotion.

I will soon run out of words to describe your poems, i may have already.

Thanks everyone for taking time to vote and comment - i wouldn't be the writer i am today without your support - Much Luv - Eirisa xoxo

Ooh Cheryl nice one i really wanna say thanks for your comments and suggestions i liove the titlt you have give me and as soon as i can edit again ima change it - im glad you like and take care xoxo