That is great. I think the beginning of your poem is a bit bumpy, the first rhyme didn't work out great, it's a bit of a slant (Cinderella/her) although those mice in that movie called her something like Cinderelly, so I guess Cindereller wouldn't sound too crazy :-P. Raising a child would be really difficult, and exposing yourself to someone who needs you to be strong is scary too, but I think that is the right thing to do as well.