Amazing, love this poem, and like Meena said, "so very true!"

This is a very mellow poem. Absolutely spiffing! (I'm british)

Its like jumping into a pudle on a rainy cold day, just becouse... :)
or a lonely swim at midnight... naked.
LOVELY

Fantastic poem as always..I really like your poems, please continue to write. Thanx, Timothy r

yes i have to agree...beautifully worded, made me all warm... i love the talk of the old lady and the switching to the child ~ v. clever...i love ur work, keep posting, and thank you for your kind coments i appreciate it so much
oxo rose

yeah i agree with everyone on the fact that it was beautiful and so true. great job!

Excellent 5/5~