That was a real good poem. So much intense. The words were a bit toughly packed. I had to read over and over to get what it was. You are really talented. Keep up the good work.

Yeah you're right....they are pretty packed...i discovered it's kinda hard writing stuff with lines that have to be exactly 10 syllables lol...

Danielle, Not all sonnets have to have 10 syllables. But some do. Some require alternative stressed and unstressed syllables too. .... just my 2 cents.

ohh alright thanx for the tip Trincy...I wasn't too sure of that...I'll remember not to trust my freshmen lit teacher again! lol

Such a beautiful flow. And I admit the mention of Shakespear stopped my browsing through your numerous pieces.
Fantastic.