Comments : With These Hands

  • 19 years ago

    by Lydia O

    This is impressive, Ten Feet tall. I give this a 5. I hope that your optimism and upbeat outlook will spread.

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    wow, ten feet tall, i love this poem, its so meaningful..i lok forward to reading more of your work :) <33
    -Mortalidaga

  • very "handy" poem! Nice poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    different, but it works excellently, well done ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by SarZz

    Dashing.....dats all i can say.....btw....u really ten feet tall?....lolzzzzz......nice work...keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay

    WOW! So original! I loved it! It flowed very nicely and this poem had a meanigful touch to it! I really look forward to reading some more of your work! Great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Silva

    very nice poem. I like the wording! good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    The repitition was great, and helped establish a solid rhythm. The idea behind the poem was pretty good, not necessarily an original idea, but written from a specific point of view, which made this poem very "you", so to speak. I definitely liked the ending stanza.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Awesome! I loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by SarZz

    Came back again....i mean...read it again....its superbz!

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    Shorty i love this one.awesome!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Inspiring. Might I add that you seem to do a fine job w/your hands....k that sounded kinda wierd. But still, good poem.